....o_o
"Please, oh please, if you have nothing nice to say don't say anything at all."
Then why even bother asking for critique?
"I worked over 3 months on this and it came out as a disaster. I PROMISE I'll go back and fix it at a later date."
You should have waited until a later date to post it then. Your movie will get stuck with the worse rating, and even if you do fix it. Nobody will see it because it'll be buried.
Main points: Make the text box look nicer, better sprite animation, and way better voice quality on those mics.